Ero Ninja Scrolls Vol. 9
The starting of the volume feels like it flows, except for some reasons it is like all over the places. Ever since Arakusa lost her virginity in vol 8, the story feels different, like the flows is off. Every other volume kept a constant reminder of the previous volume and making sure the story is not broken apart. This volume, everything is jumping all over the places, and at the end of each chapters the scenes changes again and again. The constant flow feels like a boulder suddenly dropped and blocked it from going forward. I do not know what is going in with the author except it feels rushed.
The story starting to go all over now. The sex scenes starting to just forget about not trying to fuck her pussy to just straight up fucking both pussy and ass. I mean it is great for the readers to see except the flows is just off entirely. I just think the author stop caring after the main character lost that uniqueness, her virginity.
Hope the story goes better next volume and the sex scenes even better. If none of this, then more than likely this series might get a rush end. That's not something I am looking forward at all.

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